Tuesday, September 8, 2009

the love quadrille

Katrina is the type of girl that every girl wants to be. She is a very intelligent, down to earth, and easy to get along with type of person. Katrina is a 5'5, brown-skin, average type body, very pretty girl with hair that comes to the bottom of her neck. The problem with Katrina was that she fell for men too easy. Katrina liked all types 0f men, short, tall, skinny, dark-skinned, light-skinned, she liked all except for big men. Katrina had three men on her hands . She had Jody, Antonio, and Deshawn. Katrina felt as if she was lost. She loved both Jody and Deshawn, she just didn't know who she wanted to be with. She knew that Deshawn would be the best one for her, but she had been with Jody so long that she didn't want to leave him.Jody was the type of man you would call a closed door man. I say this because in front of his friends he would call Katrina everything but her name and when they were alone he acted as i he loved her so much and as if she was the best thing that came into his life. Jody was a 5'5, light-skinned, muscular built man with brown eyes, a fade with deep waves, and dimples when he smiled. Jody may have looked good on the outside but what was on the inside didn't look so good. Jody took over the relationship with him and Katrina. Jody was the type that liked to beat on his girlfriend: he said that was to keep her in check. Jody would get drunk and come home and pick fights. He would choke Katrina until she nearly passed out. He would hit her so hard that it left her with bruises. He would scratch her face up and tell her that he did it just so no other man would want her. He would always tell her that he owned her and that she would never be able to be with no one other than him. Another thing with Jody is that he tried to use Katrina for what she had. The only time it seemed as if Jody had time for Katrina was when he wanted something from her. He was cheating on her and she knew it that was why she had no regrets about Antonio and Deshawn. Jody would constantly ask Katrina for money and when he didn't get it she got beat and would not hear from him again until he wanted something else from her. But little did he know Katrina had two other men that he did not know about. When Jody went out partying Katrina went to have a little fun of her own.
The second man that Katrina talked to was a man named Antonio. Now Antonio was the very sensitive type. He was a 6'2, dark-skinned, medium build man. He was the type that always cried about the simplest things and gave Katrina anything she wanted and would do everything she told him to do. Katrina took over the relationship with her and Antonio. In other words Antonio was a push over and she did not like that. She wanted a man with a little more back bone. And that is where Deshawn comes in. Katrina loved Deshawn. The more Jody beat on her The more she liked Deshawn.
Deshawn was a 5'8, dark-skinned, medium build man that really liked Katrina. But Katrina was playing hard to get with him because she did not want to find another man like Jody. She wanted to see was Deshawn really the type of man that he acted like. Whenever Deshawn came around Katrina would act as if she was the shy type although she was far from shy. But it seemed as if the more she acted this way the less Deshawn liked her. If Katrina was going to talk to Deshawn she needed to be her and not the type of woman she was use to acting like when she was around Jody. Deshawn was the type of man that Katrina really liked . Although he called himself a "street man", he was sweet to Katrina. He would always offer Katrina things although she didn't accept them it was far more than what Jody was doing or even attempting to do. Deshawn would try to give Katrina his last. But don't get me wrong although he offered his last he was nothing like Antonio. Deshawn had a backbone and no one was going to run over him or tell him what to do. Now with Deshawn they were equal in the relationship and that was what she wanted. Someone that didn't try to run over her and someone that didn't let her run over them.

2 comments:

  1. The purpose of your essay is very unclear to me. It seems like it is just a very literal description of three men. I do not believe your essay was complete. Keep working on it!

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  2. Good job, I think you should describe more about how Katrina felt as well as the physical descriptions of the three men. I think you did a good job on reaching your audience, just keep up the good work! ~

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